Feedback - Planning and Research

Well done girls, a very well presented blog with visual ideas throughout.  Analysis tasks include insightful comments on complex ideas and excellent use of media terms and some theory.  All of you could improve this aspect by including more signifiers from the videos as evidence.  Planning shows a proactive, organised approach with deadlines being adhered to in most cases and a progression of ideas.  At this stage you must be updating your concept development after each lesson.  Amelia and Charlie - your contributions to the blog are a high level four and you are in line for A* for planning if you maintain your current approach and make sure all task are on the blog.  Emma Louise - you have gone back and made amendments to some of your posts which has improved your grade.  To achieve a level four and maintain that grade, you need to be more of a presence on the blog and complete those outstanding posts.  Please all read my comments carefully and email me when you have made any amendments to tasks.